it's um something ...dunno

[Damaged]

comments, improvement tips please....thanks

[Juicy]

Too much contrast and you can barely see the text. Try a different text, don't bevel it.. opacity it a bit and stroke it.

[MiNdFrEaK]

damn i didnt even see this earlier. um...i think it loooks cool, except for the text. yea maybe add a color overlay and DEF stroke it, i always add strokes to my text, esp for ones that are difficult to see. and maybe add an outerglow? :unsure: