i think i see what u were goin for with blurring the c4d in front..i think it may work better if the c4d was larger or the focal was a bit smaller and the color of it isn't blending well with the rest of the tag.

Another font would fit better with the theme i think..something more bold
and move it in closer to ur focal.

His face could be sharpened a bit to help the depth

keep up the good work