The text looks slapped on, n' the focal seems to be a bit low quality. I also dun like how the flow automatically cuts from the top left, there's like a blank space there dats really bothering me. O.o

Another tidbit I noticed is dat the colors in her face look odd, it's pink/red-ish on her top left of the face then turns grey below her nose, I dunno if that was intentional or not but the colors should be blended better. :]