Patience grasshopper...hehe
Idk dude...first the girl looks out of proportion but i see what u were getting at. Then the lighting is off. from the shadows on her, looks like it's sposed to come from the left.

You don't have much middle ground to tie in the girl to the bg. Your text is disturbing the flow there and isn't clearly read.

Finally, i think this would look better if you moved her face to better fit in the rule of thirds and should be way sharper than it is. keep at it