Dream

[GameGeeks]

First, the positioning. I'm kinda stuck with it at the edge. Since move it an inch there's a strait edge all the way down.

Second, my obligation for using the stock.

reiko-stocks
stock

Critiques welcomed.

[GameGeeks]

Any suggestions?

[cs4pro]

The render needs to stand out some more.
The whole sig is very bright and it looks like everything has a low opacity.
Try to fix that.
Also I would like to see some more effects. Use some c4d's to make them.

Look up at some tuts here on the void to improve your skills.
Keep It Up

[Xelo]

as Cs4pro said, also keep the focal clean. stripes, dots etc make a face dirty.

[Sparda]

what they said lol, i do like the colours, they are easy on the eyes.

[GameGeeks]

Thanks, I was trying to go for a foggy, dream like state.

[GameGeeks]

Working on removing the rest of the dots, though the layer is being picky.

[Sparda]

i'd say this is defintly an improvement, the vocal is alot clearer and certainly draws more attention to it.

[shiv96]

Looks Better than before for sure
BUt u should add some c4ds for sure like cs10 pro said

[GameGeeks]

I'll try adding a C4D to it but I'm not very good with those. Could someone link me to a tutorial the explains basic ways to use them?