Ok, i just watched this for the first time 2 days ago... it was messed up and it made my head hurt. It had a grungy feel to it and i feel like you captured the same feeling into this tag. My thought with the text is that its white. I dont like using plain white in any of my tags unless needed. The text grabs too much attention from the face of tyler/brad pitt. If you want, a clipping mask would look good on it. Other than that, Good Job! Could you share the stock/render possibly?