ugh
object of focus
wayyyyyyy off
my eyes are drawn to that black thing on the right, i dont even know what it is...
purple looks weird, doesnt match.
the thing on the right is kindof depressing... compaired to the girl who's leaping for joy? out of place... way too much going on
girl needs to be more in focus and also closer, she's too small compaired to the fx....
no shadows or any lighting interest, no lines of motion... blahh

its good, just not... good.... idk...