ugh so so so so so cute........
but you didnt do anything to it....
you cropped it... and moved a part that you cropped out...
added 9 (yes i counted) lines... and a bunch of dots at the bottom... i'm sorry but i cant consider this your own work if you didnt even do anything with it....

edit: i think you should use the picture to your advantage. he's got an umbrella, and the most intense look on his face... why not change the background blue, put some rain clouds in there and give him some action... again, just make this image your own... right now i see a model and a photographer, you're nowhere in this art...