C is for COLOR

[Maridesu]

cnc please.
(:

[cs4pro]

I like the effects around the focal.
The render could stand out some more IMO.
There is too much negative space on the right side.

Maybe add some text?

Good job tho
KIU

[Maridesu]

Any ideas on text? I have no idea what so ever XD

[Maridesu]

hows this?
added text and made the focal more clear

[cs4pro]

Hmm the text needs to be moved soem closer to the focal....
I would change the opacity to a higher level.... not to much. But now it's too much lowered IMO.

I think you need to fill up the neg space with some effects

[Maridesu]

hmmm
I dont know which kind of effects.. Im not good with c4d.