ha thanks =]. yeah i didn't used to have the "bang" in there. until i posted it on myspace and about 4 people asked. wtf happend.

bang is for the people that are abit slower ^.^ hehe. and the reason i didn't really add alot to her death is because its not really the point of the story. its not the main sequence. i already in the first and 2nd paragraph said enough about how it effected his life. i wrote about it before it happend ^.^

anywho thanks for the the comments. i really apprechiate it. im going to write another short story pretty soon =]. and i will definantly use those as advice in my next story.