Armored Core CnC

[Liquid]

Hey guys what's up. Im new here and also to the whole sig thing.
I followed some tuts and went ahead and made this.

any CnC would help so i can improve and learn.
Tips are appreciated

[Foamy.]

for being new, it's good.
it's a little too contrasted though, and i don't like the bottom left corner.

[chonfat]

border kills the sig...

[the1jah]

um border too thick
the render shouldnt be all the way to the left it should be closer to the middle to
be the focal
and also the text, u need to lower the opacity on it

other than those this is a clean sig KIU

[Liquid]

Thx for the CnC ill try to not make the same mistakes next time

[Xelo]

making mistakes is the best way to learn, more important: if you don't make any, you're not human!!!
i like the sig. as said the border is to big, but that can easaly be helped. the horizontal part off the c4d in the bottom/right corner kills the flow. dropshadow on text is (mostly) not done.
color and compo are very nice!
keep 'm coming man!!