the blue sky doesn't fit the color of the render. the white off the text is to white compared to the clouds. i don't mind it being partionally on the focal. actually it seems the best place to put it. but as it is now it stands out to much. find a way to blend it. other then that this is nice. oh and Maridsu; this focal is perfect in the center, she looks straight and stands straight, but that's my opinion.