The smudging is way too hard on this, and if you ask me i don't think thats a very good width side i would recommend making it smaller and as i said before the smudging is too hard go to your smudge tool editor and experiment with that, and that black spot in the top right corner isn't very good. The text should be moved closer to the focal and work on the lighting with a soft white brush 65-150 pixels large.
Keep going at it.