John Terry

[Downfall]

Hey guys 2nd attempt @ verticly cnc please



if you wna see the render that i started with ill post

[Downfall]

bump/..

[Sex]

It looks a bit wild, the c4d is everywhere, there's no real flow, the lighting is also just everywhere. Text needs work too.

I like the colours, though Keep it up.

[Takken]

I agree with Sex. The lighting is too strong and the contrast is really work giving it a bland, monotonous look.

[FatalFury]

lacks flow.. try adding better depth and blending .. KIU

[Downfall]

Thanks for the help ill keep your comments in mind for my next piece