I dislike the text and the BG. too blurred. Lighting and contrast is what really helps for depth and not blurring the BG. Stop it. It takes away from the tag. do not blur the lighting! The lighting itself becomes a source of depth if done rightly along with the contrast. Remember that! I think the focal is interesting in terms of composition and color but thats about it. Work on the lighting and contrast mate. Keep at it!