Hmm all of your tags seem very similar atm, i like the lighting but the contrast needs a little bit more kick to it and get rid of that big white block all together, maybe crop it out im not feeling the depth, i can see it there but it doesnt look... right :/ i dont know maybe my vision is messing up at this late time but yeah it just seems abit messy, i prefer your Cudi tag but that is just my opinion i like this new style your going for just this tag isnt really going for me, maybe try some new stuff?

Overall good job, needs some tweeks but kiu!