Hmm i dunno what to say.. ive been thinkin about it..
But if its a style your working on... it needs work lol....
Ive seen a star effect like that somewhere but i cant remember and it looked great.. but something on this one isnt right..
Text is eh... would be a little better if you could read it more...
Light source is kinda weak but a lot of people have problems with that.. even i do im not gunna lie..
But keep at it and im sure somethin will work for you
Good Job

And if you need anything rendered i can do it just pm me and ill do it