Xeno, try and wait a while before bumping your thread. Eventually you will get some CnCs.
Could you delete the bump post you made?

I like the perception. Its good but the execution to an extent is sloppy. There are some areas that need to be sharp that are dull and blurred. The element composition at the top adds a nice touch but the color scheme clashes somewhat badly. The lighting is too harsh in some areas and perhaps even over-contrasted. Work on color scheme, lighting and composition. Keep at it!