Quote Originally Posted by Takken View Post
Remove the border and use standard borders please. Solid looking c4ds would do the focal better. The effects near its right arm look oversharpening and out of place and color seems wrong. Also the lighting needs work on. Elements on the left are ncie but try manipulating them better and fit the compo some more instead of having them "just there". I find the wireframes behind the fellow to be over sharpened as well. Use your resources better! Don't just incorporate c4ds expecting to get a cool result. Know which to pick and know which one doesn't go! Don't try slamming them all into one. It won't work. Work on composition! Keep at it!
Alright thanks for the advice, I'v
Quote Originally Posted by Deosion View Post
The light source is to big if the signature was darker the whole focal with the c4ds would stand out much better and I am not too keen about the colours aswell... but not a bad try kind of got a good points and few bad points...
I'll go for a smaller one next time, thanks for the tips.