First Vert

[Buckley]

First sig back in like, 5 months? CnC

[Downfall]

really like this can i see the stock?

[Buckley]

http://i49.tinypic.com/20rok8p.jpg

[Takken]

Remove the text. I find the lighting too be excessively overwhelming and no work on the contrast. Needs more contrast and firm color scheme for the lighting to hold a positive effect. Also work on adding minor elements to the piece. Work on your lighting. Keep at it!

[bcfcant]

The text stands out WAY to much atm, remove or find a better place to put it imo;

I think the signature is too bright atm, too many light sources - it's like a huge outer glow on the render.

Nevertheless, awesome for your first.