somehting...;o

[DrAlban]

i got bored.. so i tried something new

[Fayfie]

I've been a fan of zemotion's work ever since forever!
I like the grungy feel you created through smudging. However, the right side is too empty.
Perhaps add some text there?
Also, the red kinda clashes with the stock.

[Takken]

Nice texture of the smudge. I would lveo to see mroe smudge elements in the right and increase the lighting. The focal is a tad too dark though. Increase the color tones. Keep at it!

[bcfcant]

nice smudging and filter use?

anyway, it is lacking depth badly and the right is the focal as much as the main focal.

Tone down some sharpness+blur parts to add depth and this would be a great piece.

KIU

[DrAlban]

thanks a lot, i will correct it tomorrow or i dont know..^^

yea, smuding and filter use