Quote Originally Posted by Buckley View Post
Cant see what you did here besides add text. Original stock please?
I was gonna ask the same thing, actually. Text needs some serious improvement too, btw. It looks like your wanted to make it legible, because of how big and bold you made it, but it doesn't work because of how busy the background is. If legibility isn't an issue, I'd say make it smaller, more subtle, maybe incorporate it into your picture somehow.