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    7 days

    Chapter 1

    Here on a cool windy hillside, lying on the grass and enjoying the view of the stars. And sharing the breathtaking sky with countless stars with the girl of my dreams, sharing the warmth to keep us comfortable. Listening to music. Her soft hair brushing against my skin. Her beautiful scent. And every little thing about her. Just lying on the grass, relaxing, forgetting all our problems. I was actually having the time of my life. All of this feelings trapped. I don't know but little by little there forcing themselves or specifically helping themselves to somehow get out of my heart and be free.
    I was about to say something and.

    "I-" we both said in unison.

    "Uhm, you first" I said being a gentleman and all.

    "No, I insist you first" she said in an eagerly but confused voice.

    I followed what she said and said something.

    "Well this might sound cliche but-"

    "Please don't say those 3 words that every girl wants to hear from a guy."

    She said while smiling to make my situation even harder and making me more
    confused on what to say.

    "You're my everything. You keep my half filled heart complete. You give me something to think about when I feel sad or depressed. Even when there's nothing left you came and filled the nothingness and made me happy. Even if you won't say a word you're feelings for me will always be my everything. Even if everything in the world big or small would disappear. You will still be on my mind. But all of these words mean nothing. Because there are only three specific words to satisfy and truly define my feelings for you."

    "What?" she said, eagerly smiling on what those words are.

    "I lo-"

    DING, DING, DING.

    I was about to say those words but instead I ended up here on a bed realizing that it was all a dream. The first thing I heard when I woke up was my phone playing music.

    "She's been running through my dreams,
    And it's driving me crazy it seems."

    These lyrics just can't get out of my head. I have been listening to this song for the past week and can't get enough of it. Dreams. I thought to myself. Dreaming is just a simulation of what happened to you the past day or week or you're deepest emotions or feelings.
    "Stop dreaming, you'll only hurt yourself" I said to myself with a deep sigh.
    I tried to stand but can't my body is to tired from yesterday from schoolwork. I leaned over to my phone turned off the music player and saw it was monday. School. The first thing that popped out of my mind. But one things for sure.

    I woke up miserably.


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    This is the first chapter of my story you could call it that way.
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    LOLOLOL!

    I followed what she said and said something.

    "Well this might sound cliche but-"

    "Please don't say those 3 words that every girl wants to hear from a guy."

    She said while smiling to make my situation even harder and making me more
    confused on what to say.

    "You're my everything. You keep my half filled heart complete. You give me something to think about when I feel sad or depressed. Even when there's nothing left you came and filled the nothingness and made me happy. Even if you won't say a word you're feelings for me will always be my everything. Even if everything in the world big or small would disappear. You will still be on my mind. But all of these words mean nothing. Because there are only three specific words to satisfy and truly define my feelings for you."
    Epic :') My only issue is that you used too many periods and the story wasn't really flowing. You need to work more on your punctuation but it sounds really good right now xD Get up another one, plox

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    takken, you sweet boy you, i could eat you 6^

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    Chapter 2

    It was a typical monday morning. Everyone sitting in groups, minding there own business. And I'm here sitting with no one to talk to. No friends. No one. Just me. All alone.

    And there she is with her friends talking and laughing like there's no tommorow. I managed a little smile by just hearing her laugh and seeing her enjoying herself with her friends.

    "Is it just me or I'm the only one in the room admiring how beautiful she is."

    I mumbled to myself, smiling without anyone noticing.

    But still I'm trying so hard not to stare so long that she wouldn't notice or I would get embaressed in front of everybody. Being alone, I usually daydream but I try my best not to or go to this so called fantasy land because she would still be the one I'll be dreaming of, dreams can make it all happen, even just for a second, but it hurts to know that it isn't real just your'e simple imagination trying to convince yourself or specifically in my condition making me even more confused.

    "So what's the use." I told to myself.

    "I bet she doesn't even know or even a single clue that..."

    STOP

    The same word came to mind every time I think about her.

    "She's out of your league and even if you tried to talk to her you would just annoy her."

    SLAM!

    The door opened. Our first period teacher entered and announced that we will not have classes today because there will be an emergency meeting of teachers. She added that it was really important and every teacher is needed at the auditorium for the announcement of new guidleines for school.

    Any steriotypical student would cheer and shout because there will be no class. But everyone in the class did, except for me. Because I was still busy thinking if I should say my feelings or just shut up and move on and find a different someone. My mind keeps shifting from one decision to the other.
    "I really don't know" I mumbled to myself.

    In the afternoon everyone in the class was hanging out in the park, usually I don't come to these kinds of activities but I can't stand to be too far away from her. My mind keeps saying "Please stop, you'll only get hurt" but my heart just keeps saying the opposite. Two parts of my body, arguing, but my heart keeps on winning. I don't know if I should follow my heart or my head. "So confused" I said without anyone hearing me.

    There she is all alone under a shade of a tree. Sitting and relaxing.
    "Go and talk to her" I said. My body tries to move but it keeps on shaking. Whether to just leave her alone or go sit next to her. It was like a choice of
    life and death.

    Obviously I chose life.
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    oooo nice
    I dont make sigs anymore

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    Thnks schultz.
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    Lol Renz. Bakuman much? It sounds good so far but be careful not to go stalker on a girl later on in life

    Quote Originally Posted by Slave
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