i would agree with Don, But also Your blending is to smooth man and the bg, add some textures or patterns to liven things up.Work on your colors to, the face's color is contradcting with the rest.Also to add depth you can burn the edges or do some sexy lighting. Also I dont see much flow. If your having trouble with that, do what i do, liqiufiy or motion blur.


But you gotta start somewhere.kiu man