I like it. Not as good as your first, but pretty damn close.

Did you stroke your text? Well, it doesn't look bad if you did. I would leave w/o the stroke. You used the same technique as your current, which is fine, cuz I ware out everything I do when I'm on the ball. The render is amazing, you'll have to give it to me. I like the colors. I don't find anything to change, very well done and a good concept.