hmm well it seems like in both of your tags, your trying hard to blend your render in with the background, you need to try to work on blending but not be so...extreme? idk how to word it, hopefully you understand what i mean, but if not i can try to re-word it, but work on a nice contrast with the foreground (in your case the render) and the background


also work on your typo, i dont think they work very well in both of your pieces, try using different fonts and putting them in other places in your tags...or dont use it at all, it might work better