Undisclosed Desire

[Mish-A-Man]

About six hours of work in Photoshop. I was inspired by the song with the same name.



Comments, please

[Andrew]

I like the concept in it but i feel there is too much text in it, i know its the lyrics but i dont think anyone is going to be reading them.
Other than that i think you have potential for a unique style
Keep it up

[Mish-A-Man]

Thanks a lot for the comment Andrew What do you suggest I should do to make it better? Just erase some parts of the text with some grundge brush or put something else in there?

[Andrew]

Erase all the text above the "I want to recognize..." and erase a little bit from the bottom part.. but not too much
And then text on the right thats going vertical, toss it.
And the writing on the bottom right needs to go if you can get it out of there
thats all i have to say

[Mish-A-Man]

I made changes as you suggested, what do you think now?