Not bad. Pretty tight concept, needs a bit of a better execution though. I'd drop the face dupe over the text. Too much Topaz, needs to be toned down. I like the far left, and far right, and center, but your midway points between each are kinda meh. Mostly cuz of the topaz and mask though.
Needs a little more tweaking of the colors too. The color on your c4d doesn't work at all.