Sorry for editing but I had to point this is and I couldn't really describe it to you.
Unless you wanna be confused.
Anyways, yeah, so what I outlined is what breaks the flow in this piece.
Otherwise, great piece, love the colors, great flow, except that one part.
Lighting could be better.
Oh yeah, the circle brush or whatever on the right is a bit distracting. Like, it's too strong.
But it's a nice piece overall, kiu!