Sonic

[SuFi B A M F513]

cnc please, and thanks.

[Joeyy]

First thing what i notice is that your signature is having tons of blue colors. You should get a dark and a light blue color and stick with these or else you will get a shitload of diffrent blues.

Add some more effects and try some better smudgin.

[Jay X]

First thing what i notice is that your signature is having tons of blue colors. You should get a dark and a light blue color and stick with these or else you will get a shitload of diffrent blues.

Add some more effects and try some better smudgin.

That is probably the worst critique ever...
Your saying he should keep it monotone?
And that he should get better at smudging oh yes hes been holding back on purpose just for you
no mate...

[DR809]

Try adding a light source and incorperate more colors. Sigs usually like to pertain to a nice single flow. Use the burn tool and gradients to create depth and blend in the render. It is clear that you are new to this so look up some tutorials to expand on what knowledge of what you have now other than that kiu.

[Joeyy]

That is probably the worst critique ever...
Your saying he should keep it monotone?
And that he should get better at smudging oh yes hes been holding back on purpose just for you
no mate...

I just said that he can use 2 kinds of blue and other colors too, but he has like 6 diffrent blue colors. And well, about the smudging that was just bad from me.

[SuFi B A M F513]

Its cool joeyy, thats a fair comment dude and thanks for your imput. Also to everyone else thanks for your advice.

[Vicious Zen]

I'd recommend playing around with more colors, rather than just blue. For example, go with a yellow, or a tan color, since those are both complimentary to blue/cyan and they'd work well with your stock.

You also need to work on your flow, have all your elements going in a similar direction, or have them play off each other to direct the eye around your piece.

[SuFi B A M F513]

i will do that zen thanks. and i think im just going to start this one over and just totally do something different with it.