I agree with what domino said. Also work on your composition. It seems like there is to much going on and its hard to JUST focus on your focal point. I would suggest some blurring of your background.

Also work on your effects. For this tag i dont see any effects other than a motion blur and your lighting. So if you tone down the BG sharpness, and add some effects to your focal i think you could increase the tag quite a bit.

Goodwork, kiu