ironman

[cC.Dispeller]

[-MM.Kritez]

I really like your text. I think the bg could use some work, its very hectic... making it difficult to find your real focal point. The render itself is not blended enough. Also, when you look at the render you can see that there is a tealish lighting source coming from above/behind the render... you dont seem to have a lighting source at all.

im a big fan of your style dispeller, ive seem better from you.

kiu

[cC.Dispeller]

yeh maybe its not good work because i try another styles all days ... need improve my usually style )

[Vicious Zen]

I think it's better to try new things, but it's not like you can't do both, right?

Personally, I kinda like it. You gotta somehow make your stock stick out more. Maybe a tiny bit more blurring, and burning to the bg. And Iagree with Kritez, light source is a little off.