well first off like the render but i don't like your bg looks like was a good start but hadn't finished it take it back into photoshop open your psd and mess around with it some more try fill up all your bg area and work on smudging in your render or stock or at least blend it in more if not smudging . colors are pretty good i see used from her uniform . thats good . but kepp working it it bro not quite there yet but getting there kiu