Nice piece here. Once again I am liking your effects and color scheme. And the edit is an improvement yes. Text is still way iffy on it though. I would suggest either looking around at some other tags for text inspirations or hunting down some tutorials on it. Your latest font usage may look better with the K about the size it is now with the rest of your letters smaller. And possibly a different color choice for it aswell. Other than that I think you're on the right track. Good job...