Halo Vert

**TatorGFX** · 09-26-2010, 08:10 PM

I entered this into a SOTW and won. Would like some CnC from the professionals.
http://i55.tinypic.com/2dhb4ih.jpg

**DR809** · 09-26-2010, 08:11 PM

theres nothing there

**TatorGFX** · 09-26-2010, 08:17 PM

Originally Posted by DR809

theres nothing there

Re-uploaded

**DR809** · 09-26-2010, 08:21 PM

Hmmm well lighting is good and so are the effects
only thing killing it is the text and the border.

**TatorGFX** · 09-26-2010, 08:24 PM

Do you have any text suggestions? Also stupid Tinypic is re-sized the tag a bit so some of the quality has been killed.

**Derosion** · 09-26-2010, 08:30 PM

Overall, I like this piece.

Fix up the text for sure and I'll have no complaints.

The "S A V I O R" text could use a different font.

**DR809** · 09-26-2010, 08:40 PM

tinypic is terrible use imageshack.us
It'd look better without the savior text and get the upper text to go closer to the focal.

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