Tbh its kinda random c4ds and they don't match the render.
what you should do is use Hue/Saturation and change the color of each C4D.
instead of putting most of em on linear dodge, put some of em linear dodge for the background and have some just put on normal place infront and behind him.
burn the edges (this is optional)
Its nice to try new styles so if one doesn't work, try another to see how the next one turns out.