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Thanks! Im working on another one right now that ill post probably tomorrow. Ill work on my lighting and stuff for this one.

But while i work on that one ill throw another in here. What about this one?

Okay lighting is better in this one, effects are alright. Your text is just a no imo. You also have alot of empty space. Usually developing a bg could help. But dont just slap on a background and call it a day. You'd have to blend everything into it.