idk what this is.

[ejbonagua]

tried some c4ds and some smudge effects. how can i improve this?

[SiteWhite]

The bottom middle c4d goes from "cloudy" to uncloudy try changing that around a little.The render is light on the one side so maby add some kind of lighting to the sig. Other than that try to find images that aren't so grainy or look blurry if you know what I mean. Keep it up man.