pen tool fail

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it sucks >.<
i wass thinking let's draw a manga but it sucks




haha

[cC.DOMINO™]

hehe, nice. I would suggest basing a drawing off of shapes that are used in manga, the square head idk about it looks odd. The neck is a bit large also. Keep goin with it. Use paths so you can adjust and alter sizes of parts. Post a followup version if you do anymore with this one.

[Bogui]

looks good and i would keep on practicing it more and you will get better

[Daemon]

perhaps draw something in hand first and then pentool it it will help you a loong way its always hard to just pentool right away I like to have some sort of base layer where i draw my shapes from try smoothing out the shapes to, don't make then to rought and then just practise practise practise bet pet have some good advice