its interesting mate, nice concept. The flowing text with Individuality is realy nice, though it's not apparent why the 'd' is red. I agree with you about the Illegal font, its not the best...

The widths of the curves dont always make sense to me, normaly when i do this kinda stuff i make the width larger on a convex curve. i nromaly make the straight bits narrower than the convex curve bits and the concave bits normaly the same as the straight or a tad narrower.

For example, the white part, with the grey on the left of it is perfect, thats exactly how i would do it. but the frist curve on the right hand side doesn't make sense to me.

Note that this is only my perception, others will most prob have a totaly different opinion to mine.

[edit] when talking about curves above, i'm only talking about curves that are close together, when seperated by a larger distance its not so much an issue IMHO [/edit]