Quote Originally Posted by Fur View Post
Hm, the colors look very good. The effects are pretty nice.

One thing you seem to do is make your light sources too strong. They are suppose to look natural, lower the opacity a lot. Also I think you have it (light source) misplaced IMO it should be coming more from the center left top. Hm, I would also try and blend the text in some, it stands out too much. Just grab the text layer and lower the opacity, thats all you really need to do. One more thing try and use the black spot in the right, its too empty it kind of kills the sig a little IMO. One more thing, try and keep some flow to your sig, it has a lot of potential for flow but a few things take it off track :P.
this but you also want to develop a background most of the time. this would help with that blandness. Also if you want you might want to try to use a motion blur or Gaussian to give the light sourse a more natural feeling.