It doesn't really look like you erased the C4D on the right, it's too distracting. Also, just to create stronger depth and flow add a small C4D in front of him, near the bottom.
I'd remove the text, just doesn't look right.

I personally hate under contrast, but everybody has different opinions on that.

Depth is nice and focal is clear.
Next time add stronger saturation, contrast and more use of media.

Oh yes, just a suggestion, the border looks fine atm, but I think a 1 px all around this piece would be more suitable.

Good work mate ^u^!