I agree with the other cnc given above that it's monotone.
It's needs a bit more to it, just try to give it that 'WOW!' factor.
I also believe that your current could could be better.
I personally believe it should be removed, but if not, add more to it.
Subtexts, blending, etc.
Also, it looks LQ, imo.
Good work overall mate.
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