but everyone QQ rages when you don't place text into your art.
I wouldn't understand why, it isn't a necessisity and it usally is auto-distracting from your focal point.

Anyways, as for the piece itself.
Well, I personally think you can improve it.

I dislike the effects and the effect color.
It doesn't suit the atmosphere, imo.

Looking at the stock or whatever you've used, I would try a bit grungy type of style.
Or, you can keep it clean and try to only emphasize lighting.
(Burning, Dodging, Lighting Effects, Curves)

The text does need work, it feels too randomly placed and I don't really like the font.
Also, the stock you used looks low quality.
I'm guessing it's only the stock because your effect quality looks fine.

Should've sharpened that up a bit !
Keep it up !