Duplicated render in the background doesn't look too good.

It really makes it messy since the render has a lot going on in it.
Don't use that as your background, it's fine to use it, but here it's a big distraction.

Overall it looks low quality to me. The text could be worked on and the lighting is really off.
In fact, I can't really see a proper light source, try to work on that.

Remember, with lighting, if it's in a certain area, don't have the opposite area lighted as well.
Make sure it's somewhat realistic and makes sense.

This could've been worked on with a bigger canvas, it all feels to squished in and the border could go, that's something that is contributing to this piece being compressed like that.


Kiu bud!