First vertical sig

[Ayth]

So this is my first vertical signature and i was just trying some things out, so the outcome isn't very good.

[Derosion]

The concept you used for your focal is interesting and I quite like it, but it needs to be blended more to add to the atmosphere.

Overall it's very monotone and the text placement and the text itself is really bad.

Work on your colors mate.
Kiu.

[Ayth]

I couldn't really find a good spot for the text.
Thx for comment mate.