GTA ROUFA

[Derosion]

i'm feeling the concept but your effects are way too cluttered + overpowering.

this piece suffers from FHS.
your background is clean and simple which is fine, but in comparison to your foreground FX, it looks weird.

work on your background some more + lower your foreground FX.

Kiu!

[ROUfA]

i'm feeling the concept but your effects are way too cluttered + overpowering.

this piece suffers from FHS.
your background is clean and simple which is fine, but in comparison to your foreground FX, it looks weird.

work on your background some more + lower your foreground FX.

Kiu!

thanx for this advices man

[ROUfA]

Yeah as everyone else says the bg needs work. But for me the foreground effects seem a little bit too overwhelming because of how bright they are.

thank you bro i'll consider it ^_^

[ROUfA]

he says dope meaning awesome also meaning bro he has nothing bad to say about in other words he likes your tag . just misunderstanding is all

i for one agree witht he other bg needs work but the effects are pretty good not a big fan with the logo right near the focal tho kiu man

yeah sir maybe it's a misunderstanding ^_^

thanx for this CnC i'll try to work more on the BG