In the shadow. CnC please.

[At3rAngelus]

Well yeah I was working on my art skills with less colours.
It looks ok to me but I miss something so please be agressive with the CnC?
V2 is the original one but I found it TOO mutch.

V2

[ketg]

it feels really empty
maybe you should of blended some more of the focal
then add some depth to it to make the focal pop more
i think it has potential
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[Takken]

Familiarize yourself with the Rule of Thirds. Your focal is too far to the left, and the colors aren't the best; they are too monotoned and the effects aren't well done. I can see where you were going with the smudge but smudging requires good blending, detail and color. It seems all over the place and then with the fractal effect or w.e it was you placed over it. Did you use a Warm Filter? I suggest not using that to add color to your sig as it takes away the natural color it initially had. I suggest going over some tutorials we have here. Keep at it though!

[At3rAngelus]

Tnx for the CnC, yeah well I was working on monotome stuff since my siggs mostly are very colourfull and chaotic.
I love doing new things even if they fail