Star Wars 2nd start

[eXcell]

V2


its not done yet, i need opinons.. i like the right side but i was thinking about redoing the left side bg... text isNT final yet this is not done,

Its looking alot better than the other one lol!! :-D

[notthefed]

BG is nice and text is decent. i think you should work on blending the render and that one stock behind the trooper (c4d?) more into BG. maybe smudge or add some c4d up front. u can use hue/sat (cnrl+u) to manipulate colors which aids in blending. also you can blur BG bit to bring out the render more.
also that green radiant on the render, i think it should be erased on the black parts.
just few suggestions. KIU

[Fork]

The render looks a bit low quality. I'm not a fan of the C4D behind the render it's not very well blended and it doesn't really fit in. Depth could use a few tweaks along with the lighting. Sharpen the render a bit and throw in some gradient maps and filters for blending.

[Emsee]

Blending needs work, toning looks good. lightning is a bit off. works needs work also. C4d work and flow looks decent KIU mate

[eXcell]

i added V2, i took that C4 that was behing the render and made it look like its wrapped around his arm an goes behind his head, does that look better??


Im still looking for a font on dafont.com any ideas im open for suggestions

[eXcell]

Final version



Thank you guys for all the tips, this is prob my fav one ive made