lighting is pretty good depth could use some work ,
smudging looks ok flow is a little strange have 3 i think if u had the flow going in the direction oh his leg may make it more realistic and will just look better imo .
colors id try lightning up a tad bit too still seems a bit too dark . kiu tho great start . if need help u can pm me maybe i can help u enough to understand what im saying . ttyl and gl on next vs